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[odiabile]

Dear Player Have you noticed any grammar mistakes while playing? Do you want to help improve the game? Help us to translate the game into your language! Help us! You will receive a reward! Thank you Staff

Edited by odiabile, 14 September 2018 - 16:09.

[lupids]

spanish and english version has bomber-fh99 and avatar fh-140 names on wrong slots (swapped)

[Mostin]

Dear [color=#ff0000;]P[/color]layer

 

[color=#ff0000;]Have[/color] you notice[color=#ff0000;]d[/color] any grammar mistakes [color=#ff0000;]while[/color] playing? Do you want to help [color=#ff0000;]improve[/color] the game? Help us to translate the game in[color=#ff0000;]to[/color] your language!

[odiabile]

Oh, that's embarrassing. Let me correct Thanks. Have you noticed any grammar mistakes ingame?

[lupids]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]Small ones in the english version. Today in the events the last "Rewards from contracts +100%" is in russia. Then I noticed when I declared war, in the alliance page[/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]Diplomacy - Establish relationship[/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]War[/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]*--- (Preparation 22 часа)[/font]

[Mostin]

Under "Contracts"

 

Barbarians in the "Hostal" sector are accumulating more and more troops. It is necessary to make several attacking and defeat them.

 

Change "attacking" to "attacks"

 

This will apply to all contracts, there was a "Pirates" one too.

 

Please don't be embarressed by any mistakes - Your English is far better than many "Natives" I talk to daily!

[odiabile]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]Small ones in the english version. Today in the events the last "Rewards from contracts +100%" is in russia. Then I noticed when I declared war, in the alliance page[/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]Diplomacy - Establish relationship[/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]War[/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]*--- (Preparation 22 часа)[/font]

Thanks. Will be fixed soon.

 

 

Under "Contracts"

 

Barbarians in the "Hostal" sector are accumulating more and more troops. It is necessary to make several attacking and defeat them.

 

Change "attacking" to "attacks"

 

This will apply to all contracts, there was a "Pirates" one too.

 

Please don't be embarressed by any mistakes - Your English is far better than many "Natives" I talk to daily!

Thank you again!

 

You have to wait next update to see updates online

[lupids]

english pirate blueprints https://prnt.sc/l0fh9m

[odiabile]

Thanks for your report

 

Will be fixed soon

[odiabile]

Hi players

 

Today we have updated the translation in your language! More than 500 errors have been corrected!

 

Did you notice another grammar mistake? Report this on the forum!

 

odiabile

[JokuToinen]

Couple of small things I've noticed:

 

Metal storage info: " If the storage capacity is exceeded, metal mining stops automatically in order to prevent a catastrophic collapse in the mines of mines. " "Mines of mines" sounds weird to me. Crystal Storage info is: "..collapse in the mines", which sounds a lot more natural.

 

Some automated messages from players are not translated. For example: "Hola JokuToinen, ***** usted tiene enviada una solicitud-lista de amigos!" This one might as well be a feature instead of a bug, since this reminds the player that we are all from all around the world and speak different languages. :P

 

You've done a really good job at translating this game! Very few grammatical errors left, if any, and most of the sentence structures work very well.

 

"funny" afterword: Robot factory: "The robot factory serves for the production of modern robotics. The introduction of robotic processes in production chains allows to reduce the time of erection of building objects in the colony. " ..reduce the time of erection in the colon... hehehe I can't read this right anymore sorry guys I had to say it

 

EDIT:

Contracts:

Rescue mission (expedition): "...in case we can assist and get some of the warring over to our side. " Are we missing a noun after the adjective 'warring'?

 

in case we can assist and get some of the warring over to our side. "

Are we missing a noun after the adjective 'warring'?

Edited by JokuToinen, 19 October 2018 - 18:55.

[r4k1c]

Hi,

 

when recalling your lot on the Market it says:

Are you sure you want to remove item # 4; from sale, does it restore only 50% of the resource? 

I think it would be more clear like this:

Are you sure you want to remove this item from sale? It restores only 50% of the resource.

Br,

 -r4k1c

[odiabile]

Thank you guys!

 

Keep going like this :)

[r4k1c]

 "Destruction of the Pirates" contract says:

Pirates in the sector "Hostal" are accumulating more and more troops. It is necessary to make several attacking and defeat them.

"attacking" should be changed to "attacks" or the whole sentece could be rephrased like "It is necessary to attack several times and defeat them."

 

Br,

 -r4k1c

[JokuToinen]

Referral system: "You will receive a 10% deduction from each purchase of antimatter by your referral." This wording confuses me somewhat. It seems to implicate, that every time your referral makes an AM purchase, 10% gets substracted (=~=deduced) from you, or that your referral loses 10% which is then received by you.

 

How about "You will receive a 10% *bonus* from each purchase of antimatter by your referral.", if you receive an amount equal to 10% of a purchase whenever one is made by your referral,   "You will receive a 10% *discount for* each purchase of antimatter by your referral.", if this is a discount (sadly I am not 100% sure how the referral system works, but this most probably is not the case),

 

or simply "Every time your referral makes an antimatter purchase, you receive a gift/reward equal to 10% of the size of the purchase."

 

 

 

EDIT: I'll edit this in here because it's closely related:

Referral system: "At the moment, you did not recruited any player." should most probably be "At the moment, you have not recruited any player."

Edited by JokuToinen, 22 October 2018 - 22:37.

[odiabile]

Amazing guys!

I corrected all, since next update you will everything online

[r4k1c]

When my referral buys Antimatter, I get an untranslated message: "Антиматерия от реферала:"

 

Br,

 -r4k1c

[r4k1c]

When I report a player's message, I get an untranslated text: "Жалоба подана!"

 

Br,

 -r4k1c

[odiabile]

Thanks again! I will give you a personalized achievement as reward

[r4k1c]

Cool, thx.

 

Oh, and I just noticed this one.

 

A hostile fleet of the planet XY[x:xxx:x] [color=#008000;]was sighted[/color] near your planet YZ [x:xxx:x] [color=#b22222;]sighted[/color].

 

Edit: and this one.

 

Br,

 -r4k1c

Edited by r4k1c, 01 November 2018 - 12:34.